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oh, how I wish I could fly... :floating:


tired of using touch pad...:doh:

EDIT 1- I tried a different shading for it. Thanks to *Jeste and ~fang. I like it a whole lot more now. :D

More shading and detailed the hair more. And watermark!
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EDIT 2- Added more detail to the girl.

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:iconshewolfsnowflake:
I have to say I am astonished by the viewing of this!
This does show, and inspire, innermost feelings that some even seem to ignore daily!

The shading, except for that of the hair unfortunately (it seems a small bit flat in my strange opinion, but mostly only near the darker end), is quite smooth and even that of a daydreamer in my mind.
The "curve" in which the clouds go around is very smooth as well and adds to the emotional matters some will feel while viewing this.
The arm we see the most of though does seem a bit awkward founded for a few but if they investigated it closely it does seem normal, as the stance in the picture does make it seem like her shoulder blades may be positioned a small bit back instead of just flat out normal and since arms (or mine at least) reach down a little bit past the hip line it looks normal to me after some observance.

One of my biggest frets is the placing of your artist signature though, I have a big peeve about those though so my opinion is probably weird.

Overall, this is a beautiful piece!
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This is the first time i have ever written a critique

I love your use of perspective in this. The angle is incredible too. The feeling of looking up into the sky with her and staring at the clouds is humbling.

The shading here is fantastic. The bottom of the clouds and the sunlight especially. The fabric folds also make this realistic and intriguing. This reminds me of many times when i have looked into the sky and thought of my life.

I only have one question overall. the front arm seems a little long....is it because of the angle at which i am viewing her?
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:iconfirelilyofthephoenix:
man. this is really good. the colors and everything.
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:iconlightskin:
*lightskin Aug 25, 2011  Student Digital Artist
:aww:
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Mood: Wow! ~chaffyy Aug 21, 2011  Student Digital Artist
amazing atmosphere. it really speaks. :o
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:iconlightskin:
*lightskin Aug 25, 2011  Student Digital Artist
oh, thank you :aww:
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Mood: Love ~Spirit-Lily Jan 8, 2011  Student Writer
I love the hair!
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:iconlightskin:
*lightskin Jan 9, 2011  Student Digital Artist
glad you do~ :aww:
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~monkeymintaka Sep 21, 2010  Student Digital Artist
I love the cloud shading, its so smooth :D
It kinda looks like a storm is coming too.
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:iconlightskin:
*lightskin Sep 21, 2010  Student Digital Artist
Glad you like it. :)
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~Kenliano Sep 20, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
Lovely! The concept is excellent!
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