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oh, how I wish I could fly... :floating:


tired of using touch pad...:doh:

<edit>I tried a different shading for it. Thanks to =Jeste and *fang. I like it a lot more now. :D

More shading and detailed the hair more. And watermark! :icondonotuseplz::iconmyartplz:

Critiques


:iconlord44:
This is the first time i have ever written a critique

I love your use of perspective in this. The angle is incredible too. The feeling of looking up into the sky with her and staring at the clouds is humbling.

The shading here is fantastic. The bottom of the clouds and the sunlight especially. The fabric folds also make this realistic and intriguing. This reminds me of many times when i have looked into the sky and thought of my life.

I only have one question overall. the front arm seems a little long....is it because of the angle at which i am viewing her?
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:iconjeste:
This piece this is really stunning. What really works well in the image is the angle as the viewer isn't only looking at the character but also seeing what the character is looking at. The perspective of the clouds as well as the swirling seems to be as if they were anouncing something dangerous, like a storm. Who knows maybe there is?
As for the technique - its simple and it works well, however if the girl had cleaner edges it would look better against the blurred sky.
The only area that in my opionion doesn't work well are the hair, they seem a bit flat. Singling out strands and highlighting those individually works better than covering an area with "highlight".
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:iconfirestar21:
Ooh, it's pretty...and OMG CLEAN LINES IS SO CLEEAANN... O-O

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:iconlightskin:
*giggles* thankious! .lol.

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:iconsuperaura:
en cierto modo, y aunque no las veas, tu corazon ya tiene alas :)

este dibujo es bellisimo, casi parece un retrato mio... fav, por supuesto!

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:icontsu-sugar:
beaultiful!!!!:glomp:

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:iconlightskin:
Aww, :blowkiss::hug:
Muchisimas gracias<33

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:iconsuperaura:
de nada linda:blowkiss:

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:icontoastmstr9:
hosheet.
VERY nice.
i love the clouds. 0.0

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:iconlightskin:
Thankious!*glomps*

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:iconmyth12:
I really like the angle of this! :heart: And it's all so neat and pretty!

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:icontwixbar:
Awesome! The sky is absolutley beautiful!

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